The Hidden Fence
Rita Joe
Once upon a time I was in spaces free
I trod the lane of the rainbow road
My identity my own
And all the earth and sky my friend.
In barricaded fences of rescue
Submission becoming my prison
Now slowing to a trickle.
My stride becoming a shuffle
The feathers hanging limp as I signed the X
The spaces are still there for me to follow
In the wide open range
I teach you my culture
I want to teach you about me
Let me.
The poem “The Hidden fence” by Rita Joe, is compelling with ties to culture and its significance to an individual and how it makes a person them. With this poem Joe has made a statement to not just aboriginal people but also to those who have lost their culture and can’t connect like they once were. This further connects to the importance of cultural identity to someone. In the context of the poem and Joe herself this would tie to her and those closest to her as they had once lost their culture and were assimilated into the western way of life. She describes the way the indigenous people lost their way of life and lost their connection due to the residential schools. With those who love and care about the culture they strive to teach others and preserve its significance to them and many others. Joe has a wonderful way of describing how culture is important to her and a way for those to reconcile with their culture identity.

Joe has several important statements in the poem that are important to her but others of different cultures can deeply connect with. One that can speak volumes is, “submission becoming my prison” this specific part from her poem is significant because of the reality of it. The reality of it is that submission or pleasing is a part of how people interact with each other, in this specific context not only is it part of how she interacts with others it’s also how her culture is like, they appeal to the elders or those older. In this poem Joe is able to relate to many while staying within a specific manner regarding her identity and her culture.

This poem is something I can relate to, something that spoke to me while I read and analyzed it. Joe has made a message with this poem of preserving culture and its importance to an individual. To me this is not an old topic, this is something prevalent in my life, I see this everyday. I have lost a sense of cultural identity, the example being not being able to communicate with my family, specifically my grandmother. My grandmother is very important in my life, she is like a ray of sunshine, but the thing is I am not able to communicate with her. I have lost all sense of identity and I am not in touch with my cultural identity. Before I was able to speak and understand what my grandmother and mother said, now I am not able to understand a lot and I only respond in a broken way of speaking. Stated in the poem it says, “submission becoming my prison,” this line in the poem is something that I can see in myself. Growing up learning English and my parents wanting to help me learn they also spoke english to me, I feel as though my submission is that I did not care to speak in my mothers language. This is something I regret, something that I wish never happened. Like the speaker and her spaces that were once free, I want to go back to those spaces and regain a new understanding and become enlightened by those who can teach me. To sum up, Joe’s well written poem has spoken to me and I am easily able to connect with it, I wish the message she spoke was seen sooner by me.
Ultimately, Joe has written “The Hidden Fence” with the ideas of culture and the importance of it in combination with identity. She speaks of how culture can be taken, but if the culture is important, just losing it will not be the reason for it becoming extinct, they will want to regain what was lost. Joe talks about the perseverance of all and how it affects their culture and its importance to them. “The Hidden Fence” is a great example of the perseverance of individuals whose culture is so important to them that they will not let it stop at one terrible occasion.