Imperfections Everywhere

Imperfections Everywhere

What phrases, words, or segments of the poem stood out to you? What does it mean and how does it connect to the human experience?

The poem Lady Liberty, by Tato Laviera reveals the theme of freedom and unity. Laveria portrays the human condition of equality, liberation and freedom through the use of the motif of the Statue of Liberty. The poem personifies the statue of liberty as a living thing, and the suffering it endured during the harsh weather. When I first read this poem, I  simply looked at its literal meaning, but when I reread the poem, I finally understood the metaphorical meaning. The poem illustrates how hard the struggle for freedom and equality is. After the Declaration of Independence, it was announced as the first step to freedom, however, it only applied to “white men” and not women or other “colors”. This text exemplifies the struggle for liberty and how hard it was for America to gain that. This poem has greatly educated us on not only the weaknesses of America but also the weaknesses of the global community. I have realized that such imperfections still exist in every nation, and that can be implied to individuals in a literary aspect. Realizing that not everyone is perfect and how we must reflect our past actions and change accordingly to that is well reflected in this text.

Statue of Liberty arrives in New York Harbor, June 17, 1885 - POLITICO

The poem mainly generalizes on the topic of equality and fairness, and how imperfections around the world exist. There are many significant words that highlight those key concepts, such as the line “discolored verses staining her robe,”. The discolored verses refer to the Declaration of Independence, and how it was considered to be the first act of freedom to the citizens of America. However, it only applied to “white males’’ and not women or any other race. Laviera uses the metaphor of the “verses staining her robe” to show how it damages Lady Liberty’s image, which is symbolic of damaging America’s identity as well. Another line that brought my attention, “hunger abounds, our soil is plentiful,” displays a major contemporary issue – imperfection – that still exists in the world. Laviera brings the message of how America has rich soil that can provide plenty of food, yet much of the world starves. He tries to convey a message of how America has the resources to help other countries, yet it doesn’t. I strongly believe that these two lines support the theme of imperfections the best, as it gives context about contemporary issues and how we were blinded by our own manifestation of being perfect. By focusing on those imperfections, we can grow to be better. 

What is the significance of humiliation in the line, “That humiliation” ?

The Israeli-Palestinian conflict explained – World Peace Tracts

After listening to another poetry seminar about the poem, We shoot children too, don’t we?” by Dan Almagor, I can see a prevalent theme of humanity versus corruption. From what I recall, the group analyzed the irony of the title and many other figurative elements, which all supported the theme of humanity. Almagor’s use of irony from the title shoot children too, don’t we?” depicts how the conflict between the Israelis and Palestinian have resulted in a loss of humanity. In context, Almagor speaks on behalf of the Palestinian nation, and how they should not lose their humanness for their struggle for freedom, but instead be more peaceful and diplomatic. As the conflict claims many lives, Almagor stresses the fact that we could save lives if we retain our humanity, instead of using force and violence.

While re-reading the poem, the repetition of the word “Humiliation” stresses the loss in humanity due to the conflict. As adversity between nations occurs and lives are lost, people seek vengeance for their people, ultimately resulting in more killings. In this poem, Almagor illustrates how individuals lose their humanity through conflict, and how it is humiliation to constantly use force against people without any regard of empathy. 

Conclusion

Overall, I clearly enjoyed reading both the poems that were discussed above, and both had really strong themes that were conveyed. To summarize, the poem Lady Liberty, demonstrated how nothing in this world is perfect, and how everyone should focus on their imperfections rather than celebrating their perfections. The other poem, “We shoot children too, don’t we?” uses a rhetorical question and irony to portray the theme of humanity and how individuals must not lose it during conflict, as it is “humiliation’’. All in all, both poems were great to read and provided great messages.

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What can the unison of humanity accomplish?

What can the unison of humanity accomplish?

In class, my group selected the renowned poem written by Amanda Gorman for the 46th U.S. president’s inauguration. Gorman is now the youngest writer to write a poem to commemorate a president. The poem has a fascinating format; free verse and contemporary. You may also notice a subtle rhythm similar to the one you may hear in a hip-hop song.

 

 

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The author of “The Hill We Climb”, Amanda Gorman

I can see why Gorman was qualified enough to recite her poem at such a consequential celebration. Gorman immediately dives into a collective identity (referring to the people of the United States) with the line, [“When day comes, we ask ourselves”].

This line helps everyone feel included, no matter their identity because she never specified. She points to a large audience; it emphasizes the theme of collective hope. The line [“We’ve learned that quiet isn’t always peace /And the norms and notions of what just is, / Isn’t always just-ice.”]  The line does a great job of encapturing some of the tragic injustices that occurred during the year 2021. For example, when George Floyd was brutally murdered by the police force without good reason.

 

 

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Conformity in society

The first section of the quote means that silence does not equate to tranquillity. This is a bold statement that a lot of people can relate to. Many people have chosen to conform to the quietness that society turns to when they should’ve been speaking out, but it’s much easier to simply say they won’t discuss it because it will result in more conflict. In reality, raising awareness about an issue often results in solving the conflict, which will bring about peace.

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The second part of that quote rebuttals social norms of justification. There is a witty comparison between “just is” and “just-ice”. They may sound very similar, but upon further reflection, that hyphen makes all the difference. Amanda explains the things that society may deem fair are not always justice. Again, we see many conform to these societal values because doing so is more convenient; nobody wants to stand out. These quotes developed some of the issues that the human condition experiences, all with the commonality of conformity. The poem then shifts to a hopeful tone striving to lift the divides between humans set by society.

 

 

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The first step to unison is to work toward it

 [“But that doesn’t mean we are striving to form a union that is perfect. We are striving to forge a union with purpose, to compose a country committed to all cultures, colours, characters and conditions of man.”] This line represents the entirety of the poem. The goal is not to be a perfect world, but for the human condition to coexist with the objective of constant improvement to make it a better place for all people, no matter what identity they may be involved with.

 

 

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Light at the end of the tunnel

Amanda Gorman aimed to encapsulate themes of hope, unity, and improvement. “The Hill We Climb” was always significant to me, from the very moment I first heard it. It inspired me to start looking at people, and not our differences and division. Instead of closing off from people because of the societal norms I conformed to, I wanted to put those boundaries aside and start looking at people in another light.

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The same light that Amanda Gorman spoke about in her poem, [“For there is always light,/if only we’re brave enough to see it./ If only we’re brave enough to be it.”] This last line kept me thinking about the way I see the world. I had always let the darkness consume the lights in my life. This quote taught me if I could only have the grace to keep finding this light, I would always be able to push through the obstacles in my way. If only I could be the light in my life, the light would endlessly outshine the darkness.

 

“I will never apologize for saying that the future of humanity and the future of the world is going to be defined by what we have in common as opposed to those things that seperate us and ultimately lead us into conflict.” – Barack Obama

When I first heard this poem, it felt like a trance or an alternate universe in which amelioration and consensus, like a fantasy all people share. Until I concluded that Amanda Gorman is saying it could happen if we all commit to it. If we all made an effort to try; if we all made an effort to hope; if we all made an effort to refine; if we all made an effort to heal, it could happen in real life.

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To think that one day we can all embrace our differences and let them be a factor that unifies humanity, instead of pushing us apart is a beautiful thought. From the day I was enlightened, I wanted to adopt this notion into my ideologies, and implement it in all aspects of my life. I hope I can remember this every time I make a decision, every time I have a conversation, and every time I commit.

 

 


 

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Lady Liberty

I spent a lot of time reflecting on the poem “Lady Liberty” by Tato Laviera. The poem focuses attention on inclusivity. “Lady Liberty” is about touching everyone with the same liberty; to free everyone with the same rights, privileges, and advantages.

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I feel this topic is discarded and overlooked since we have come to a day and age where this issue receives some light. But does it reach enough light so that action is taken to resolve the problem? Or is it only brought into enough light so that some fleeting sympathy is received before citizens go about their day? Laviera expresses themes of healing, collectivity, and equity. There is a stanza in the poem that touched me. 

 

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The author of “Lady Liberty”, Tato Laviera

[“so touch me,

and in touching me

touch all our people.

do not single me out,

touch all our people,

touch all our people,

all our people

     our people

         people.”]

 

 

 

 

 

The way that the line starts to get shorter and shorter until it singles out “people” is the entire message of the text. It’s slowly specifying collectives that may be a minority in this world. That may not have a voice to speak out. That may not have the resources that many of us do. The specification points to the message of every single person.

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This stanza has a profound contribution to the story as it re-emphasizes the very reason for the poem. As an immigrant, I’m very thankful for poets such as Laviera for speaking to society; telling humanity that these issues still exist. Indeed, I agree we ought to focus on using this freedom to benefit everyone instead of exploiting the liberty to harm them. Celebrating the 4th of July will then be truly deserving. 

 

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Poetry Seminar Responses

The Land of The Free” – Response to Let America Be America Again by Langston Hughes

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America. The land of the free.

That is what we set out to be.

But the American dream was an American nightmare

It turned out to be a nightmare, indeed

We pledge allegiance to the flag

We pledge liberty for all

But where was that pledge

When you watched us fall?

The only stars we saw in the sky were on the flag

Of the country that imprisoned us

They bruised and beat down all of our own

How did we call this our home?

Why do we call this our home?

It is our home as much as it is yours.

Our blood and our tears watered the crops

Filled the rivers, stained the streams

That sustained this so-called land of the free

But this land of the free did not sustain me

The land of the free. What does that mean?

And why can’t those called the free include me?

What was my crime that caused me to be chained?

Was I guilty of being? Guilty of breathing?

Nobody chose to stand up for me. 

But now I ask you to stand up with me.

With all for freedom comes freedom for all

A true freedom that lasts. A freedom that matters.

From the mountaintop to the big city

From the Great Plains to great rivers

Regardless of culture, race, or colour

From the rich to the poor

An America where everyone can be free. That is all I ask for.

This is a poem responding to the poem “Let America Be America Again” by Langston Hughes. My response starts off by introducing this notion of America being the land of the free. However, without naming a particular group, the narrator starts introducing the idea that it is not truly free. Much like the poem I was responding to, I decided to not assign an ethnicity or minority to the narrator in order to keep it relatable for all of the oppressed.

“The Same” – Response to We Shoot Children Too, Don’t We by Dan Almagor

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We are the same. We are all the same.

We bleed, sweat, and breathe same.

The difference is we’re better simply because we are

We have the right, it’s our duty.

But what divine being gave us the right,

who, what, gave us the right

to laugh at their shrieks, to their screams,

are we really defending when we do these things?

Why do we raise our weapons against the weaponless?

This is not right.

And now we teach children to take up our fight.

Is this right? Is it not wrong?

That we teach ours to shoot theirs for singing their nation’s song?

Why do we teach them to throw stones and bombs at others?

They should throw stones to skip along the river

where now blood flows, human crimson streams

which carry their dead’s broken dreams

The dead; men, women, and children who lived.

Do you think our actions can be forgived?

When people die, children cry

but why don’t we cry when children die?

This is a poem responding to the poem “We Shoot Children Too, Don’t We”. This was a very impactful poem showing the sense of humanity lost in the conflict ensuing between Israel and Palestine. Criticizing Israel’s actions against the people of Palestine, the poet demonstrates that we are all human. Through my poem, I attempt to encapsulate the same basic principle; we are all human and deserve to be treated as such.