A Tale of Memories and Hardships

A Tale of Memories and Hardships

Obasan, written by Joy Kogawa, is an insightful novel into the horrors the Canadian-Japanese experienced during the Second World War, and how the history still shapes many of their lives years later.

The story follows Megumi Naomi Nakane, who as a young girl experiences the internment of the Japanese-Canadians first hand and how she grew up throughout such a harsh period of time. The story is told through a handful of Naomi’s perspectives starting the story off in 1972 with her uncle Isamu. Her uncle soon passes away and Naomi drives out to visit her Obasan (aunt/uncle’s wife). After a few chapters with Obasan the story then transitions to being told through a series of old letters and flashbacks. It is here where we are given the full story from Naomi’s perspective piece by piece until we return to the 70s for the final few chapters, still pondering the past events.

Though an important perspective and a powerful story, the novel can feel very run-on and unnecessary at times especially during the first half of the book. This is due to the writing style which the author has chosen to use. Throughout the story Kogawa writes in extreme and precise detail, outlining every aspect of the scene she’s describing. While useful for laying down exactly what the author wants the reader to know and picture, Kogawa tends to do this somewhat erratically, choosing to focus on some of the most mundane or insignificant aspects of a scene. This can be anything from a full page exclusively about the clutter of a kitchen fridge, to the patterning on a set of dishes used once in a single chapter. While one could look at this from a literary standpoint and say it shows the contrast of different ways Naomi and her family lived throughout the years, this unique usage of description can turn a reader away from the story due to how frustratingly time consuming it can be. The novel can feel slow and verge on boring thanks to Kogawa’s writing, which can be quite bothersome when trying to read a novel that tackles such a complex and painful subject. The use of flashbacks can also feel rather jarring at times, due to not always being certain as to where and when an event is taking place unless explicitly stated (which it often is fortunately). However, I did find that the impact certain points or ideas had would not be felt the same if the story were to be told in a linear fashion.

Though a tough read at times due to the author’s methodology, Obasan is an important story working to understand about how to live with oneself after an atrocity like the internment camps during WWII. In the end, I enjoyed this book, even if it isn’t for everyone. I would recommend it to any and all looking for a historical-fiction that delves deep into the personal and emotional aspects of how war changes even those not directly involved in it.

 

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https://www.project44.ca/japanese-canadian-internment

Japanese Canadian Historic Sites in BC: Journeys of Home

https://fvcurrent.com/p/tashme-museum/

Obasan By Joy Kogawa Book Review

Marginalization in Society

Marginalization in Society

The poem “Everyday We Get More Illegal” by Juan Felipe Herrera captures the struggles, complexities, and humanity of individuals grappling with the realities of immigration, challenging the legitimacy of the immigration laws in the United States. The poem uses a powerful metaphor of a peach tree, rising and falling with fruit while sparrows fight over it. This metaphor symbolizes the resilience of life, even in the face of adversity and struggle. Herrera draws attention to the harsh realities faced by immigrants in the United States, where laws and detention cells become oppressive forces that separate families and marginalized communities. The poet’s carefully selected language infuses the poem with urgency and momentum. Read more

The Restriction On Freedom.

The Restriction On Freedom.

Before reading this poem I had a fundamental idea of who the author was and what they usually write about.

I originally made the assumption that the poem was going to be generic and unnoteworthy since it was issued and had been in the mainstream for quite a while.

Still, after reading “Every day we get more Illegal” by Juan Philipe Herrera, I was pleasantly surprised!

Everything from the choice of words to the way it was formatted all had a connection to the overarching idea of how immigrants are treated and viewed in society, for example, the line “laws pass laws with scientific walls” shows how the law is being upheld by weapons of science such as guns and disobeying those laws would have a high probability of death in the case of the offender as these weapons are easy to use.

In general, this poem, while it might not seem like it, provides one with an in-depth view of the immigrant situation and how if we want to change the system for the people who come over to the west for a better life we need to be more open to the facts that they are humans too while disregarding where they came from as a reason to treat them differently.


Another poem that was elaborated on in class that I found interesting was ¨Siren Song¨ by Margret Atwood.

The idea of using the experience of being underestimated to your advantage is fascinating and she portrays it very clearly in her poem.

The sailor goes toward the siren because of his ideology that the siren can not hurt him, this would eventually lead to his demise as the siren is ready and able to kill the sailor because of his naiveness and her past experience of being underestimated by previous sailors.

While I am unable to relate to this personally I can mention how it relates to humans and society as a whole.

The idea of the underdog winning is very common and looked fondly upon by people in today’s world as the idea is promoted by movies and inspirational stories online. In this poem, the Siren could be seen as the underdog who is underestimated by the sailor which gives the Siren an advantage, this can be seen in the real world when, for example, a new employee is hired at a major law firm, everyone who´s been there longer does not expect, but the new person uses that to their advantage to surprise everyone by doing better than everyone.

 

 

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Racial Injustices In America, All People Are The Same

“dear white america”

Danez Smith wrote the poem, “dear white america,” because he was upset about the systemic racism in America. They made the poem based on personal experiences that they have gone through as African Americans in America. The poem was made as a wake-up call for those in America to see and envision what coloured people go through.


“I reach for black folks and touch only air,”

In this Danez tries to explain what life is like being black and how they live. How he reaches for his people, his brothers and sisters to only be met with nothingness. Showing how bad of a life these people have, coming home to be told that your family member had died. This quote gives off a feeling of losing hope, taking your mind to a dark place that has no return. Feels as if it was time to just give up on everything you have as these people cannot live a normal life.


“steal or sell or cast overboard or hang or beat or drown or own or redline or shackle or silence or cheat or choke or cover-up or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or ruin”

Danez Smith saying this has created a juxtaposition between the past and the present. The repetition of words creates an enforced feeling of what happens to people who are black in modern and past times. The juxtaposition is between the past and present injustices, as before slavery was the main injustice. How the slaves would be shackled, silenced, choked. In the present African Americans are being shot and jailed. These words being repeated show the police brutality in the present day and the racial slavery in the past. 

I have realized how many references Danez Smith brings up about the past compared to the present, this has really elevated his message. It shows how society as a whole is moving forward and many do believe that racism is gone. However, it is still here, although they now have rights and freedoms there are still things such as police brutality that house injustices. They talk about their ancestors as well, what their people had gone through and how they are still going through racial injustices.


“We Shoot Children Don’t We”

The poem, “we shoot children too don’t we?” highlights the problem between war with the use of the Palestinian and Israeli conflict. Ongoing war for land and rights with one powerhouse vs a small nation. Although, the main idea here is to promote anti-war and peacefulness the message that could also be seen is that humans are the same. We should treat others like we treat our own, no matter what nation they come from.


“They love their wives and children as we do, no less. And our children now shoot theirs with lead, plastic bullets, and gas.”

This shows that both sides are the same, both Palestinians and Israelis have the same human traits. Both peoples in the conflict are more similar than they would think, they both can show love, empathy, and compassion. However, instead of showing that they are controlled by their government and elders. They would show hatred and war to solve problems they thought they would have whilst creating new ones. This hatred is fueled only by the fact that they come from different backgrounds, and have different belief systems and ideologies. Yet one side is grown and taught to hate the other, to create fear and show who is the more superior state. 


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THE UNITED STATES BIG PROBLEM AND THE ISRAEL PALESTINE CONFLICT

dear white america

Dear White America

by Danez Smith

is a poem about the disparity between black people and white people in America and and his condemnation it. when loss and abuse is common from oppression, it can lead to individuals who tries to accept the suffering that will lead themselves to want to escape from oppression. This is a huge problem in America that pervades to the root of their culture and history.

One of the main issues the author brings up in the poem is the multiple deaths he has gone through in his life and how he wishes that god could bring them back. As quoted in the line

“I want Chucky, Bo, Meech, Trayvon, Sean & Jonylah risen three days after their entombing, their ghost re-gifted flesh & blood, their flesh & blood re-gifted their children”.

He has also given reasons for these deaths in what he calls white bread voodoo referring to how the police are the ones killing his brothers and sisters. The internalized racism in the police system and the countless deaths caused out of these preconceived notions are glanced over by people because they’re planning their brunch.

Another big part of his poem is how he’s left earth for another planet. This is how he expresses that he doesn’t want to be apart of the America that kills his brothers and sisters, though he is forced to be apart of it against his will; they were forced to even though they did not build the boats that brought them there, they did not build the prisons they are trapped in and they did not ask to join America. He sees people not a skin colour but is asked why its always about race. He wants a place where his brothers and sisters can live freely without pain or suffering.This all stems from the internalized racism that America has. He brings about the fact that its not them doing it to themselves but its white people who are killing his brothers be that through the system of police or destroying their history his people have had through out America. The white America is against the black parts of America even though they say they aren’t.

We shoot children too, don’t we

by Dan Almagor

is a poem about the Israeli and Palestinian conflict that has been going on since the 1950’s and brutality of the war itself. he sees the similarities between what Israel is currently doing to Palestine as to what has happened to the Ukrainian Jews by the Tsar soldiers, the Israeli militarism will not end in Israel staying the home of the Jewish.

Almagor makes a point of saying that none of these people, the Palestinians and the Israelis wanted to have a full scale war where both sides have casualties each day. They just want to live their lives in peace and be normal people who are proud of their country. But the people of both sides still push that the other must go for them to live in safety. The Israeli military who has a past of atrocities against the Muslim people of Palestine and blame the Islamic extremists of Palestine for why they have to fight and the people of Palestine who fight against the expanse of the Israeli state using “terrorist” tactics. Both sides perpetuating the conflict in a never ending cycle till one state is declared true and has full control over all the land, the Israeli state or the Palestinian state.

What Almagor has seen in the past and present of Israel through his time of being a lyricist for the Israeli government writing “Israeli macho culture and military heroism” now as a professor of Hebrew literature, he sees the history of racism that has pervaded their culture for a long time.

“Mean, arrogant, and dumb.
Who do we think we are?
Who gave us the right
To be so deaf, so dumb?
Ignoring the obvious: They are as human
As we are, as we are.
At least as human as we used to be
Only forty-one years ago.
No less diligent, no less smart.
As sensitive, as full of hope.
They love their wives and children
As we do, no less.
And our children now shoot theirs
With lead, plastic bullets, and gas.”

Israel makes it out as though they are not people just the terrorists who want to get rid of the Jewish birth place, even though most of these people are not what Israel makes them out to be. Most of the Palestinian people do not want the conflict they were forced into by the minority population of extremists who also affect the Palestinian people themselves.

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We are all made of blood and flesh, Why act as if people are Aliens?

We are all made of blood and flesh, Why act as if people are Aliens?

“dear white america” By Danez Smith

Dear White American is a poem written by Danez Smith under frustration due to the racism he experienced as an African American. They use the poem as a wake-up call to “White America” to call out the system and the normalized racism in society. As his whole poem is calling society out, I decided to do a critical analysis.


“i’ve left Earth to find a place where my kin can be safe, where black people ain’t but people the same color as the good, wet earth, until that means something, until  then i bid you well, i bid you war, i bid you our lives to gamble with no more. i’ve left Earth & i am touching everything you beg your telescopes to show you. i’m giving the stars their right names.”

In these lines, Danez speaks of the inconceivable as they reach out to space and leave the earth for a world better. In this new world, they reach planets further than is done in reality. Showing how to further developed the world can be if people didn’t live under a system of oppression. How better the world can be if it wasn’t built on the backs of slaves and the injustices of others.


“steal or sell or cast overboard or hang or beat or drown or own or redline or shackle or silence or cheat or choke or cover up or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or ruin”

In the lines “steal or sell or cast overboard or hang or beat or drown or own or redline or shackle or silence or cheat or choke or cover up or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or jail or shoot or ruin” there is a repetition and list of many injustices black people have experienced. A juxtaposition of the past and present can be seen in the lines “steal or sell or cast overboard or hang” they speak of the past as many of their ancestors were brought to America and sold among society and used as slaves. They then relate it to the present as they speak of African Americans being shot, and jailed to bring the point that nothing has changed. Although slavery is gone new issues have arisen to take its place. The repetition of “shoot or jail” also emphasizes the recurring events of police brutality against the black community.

One thing I came to realize while reading this work is that they use many references to create a contrast between present-day racism and racism experienced by their ancestors. Which is a recurring theme in many of their poems. They always created similarities between the past and present to emphasize that although society is moving forwards it is still stuck in the same spot. Like a broken record player, although the disk ( representing society) is moving, the lyrics or music on the record is repeating the same lyrics (representing the fact that society is still hung up on the same derogatory ideas). Which I have also been able to witness when the poem inspired me to reflect on society. Many people base racism on the past and claim it’s only racist if it has something to do with harassment on an extreme level. For example, many influencers on social media have become famous for minuscule jokes about racial stereotypes. But because racism isn’t as bad as it was in the past it’s brushed under the rug and normalized in society. Even defended when called out.


“We shoot children too, don’t we?” By Dan Almagor

This poem really hit my heart as it spoke of the war going on in the middle east between Palestinians and Israelis. Although the most evident message is the prominent idea of anti-war, a more universal message I saw was we as people should treat others equally as we are all humans and we should not let a bias cloud our judgment on our opinions on them. Dan Almagor conveys this message through the way he writes his poem.

“No less diligent, no less smart.

As sensitive, as full of hope.

They love their wives and children

As we do, no less.”

For example in these lines he creates a bridge over the abyss created by the two states of Palestine and Israel, showing how both races are the same. Although cultures follow different ideals, we are all women and share the same love in this world. He does this many times as he shows the hypocrisy in the way we as humans think. As humans we allow our judgments of others to be decided by the appearance or faith an individual may have. We group people among many sub-sections of the human race among categories like the poor and the rich, or the color of people’s skin. Then pit them in a hierarchy based on what we think is better, allowing this to control our actions. But looking past this and seeing each other internally, we are able to see the light and darkness among each other. We are able to see that we all love the same and that we all grieve or feel sorrow the same. But this is not an idea of just a man trying to advocate for his race, but an idea created by the world.


Images referenced

  1.  https://www.redbubble.com/shop/blm+fist+stickers
  2. https://www.middleeastmonitor.com/20190325-ngo-study-shows-rapid-deterioration-in-mental-health-of-palestinian-children-in-gaza/
  3. https://www.wsj.com/articles/the-myth-of-systemic-police-racism-11591119883
  4. https://www.thenation.com/article/archive/danez-smith-between-the-news-and-a-prayer/
  5. https://www.google.com/search?q=slaves+american+&tbm=isch&ved=2ahUKEwjXj-aF5ab3AhUwBzQIHUfaCWkQ2-cCegQIABAA&oq=slaves+american+&gs_lcp=CgNpbWcQAzIFCAAQgAQyBQgAEIAEMgQIABAeMgYIABAIEB4yBggAEAgQHjIGCAAQCBAeMgYIABAIEB4yBggAEAgQHjIGCAAQCBAeMgYIABAIEB5QtgJY_AhgqwtoAHAAeACAAUWIAdkDkgEBOJgBAKABAaoBC2d3cy13aXotaW1nwAEB&sclient=img&ei=KyliYpfONLCO0PEPx7SnyAY&bih=874&biw=1504&rlz=1C1RXQR_enCA934CA934&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=CiVKEdBX2hBLcM&imgdii=pdrq8ssemg4fOM
  6. https://jewishjournal.com/commentary/opinion/228311/will-protect-children-morally-bankrupt-palestinian-children-protection-act/

Labeling others how we please / Racism and it’s prevalence to society.

Labeling others how we please / Racism and it’s prevalence to society.

“Everyday we get more Illegal”, a poem by Juan Felipe Herrera, directly discusses the adversity that Mexican immigrants face and how they collectively struggle in society. Juan Felipe himself was the son of Mexican immigrants, meaning he has personally experienced the injustices and discrimination that is introduced in his piece. The poem mainly describes how immigrants face being labeled by others, deportations, separation from families, and being directly targeted by laws that are meant to negatively interfere with their immigration.

 The context of this poem specifically discusses the discrimination Mexican immigrants face, and how no matter what they do or how they try to fit into society, others may always view them as “illegal” and unwanted because they don’t fit in with their standards. Most immigrants leave their homes, and sometimes even their families, in hopes to set out to a country with more opportunities to better support themselves and their loved ones. However, in the case where they attempt to do so, they have to face such injustices and prejudice.

These immigrants are constantly being labeled as ‘illegal’ and targeted by “laws with scientific walls” that are meant to negatively impact them and discourage other Mexican immigrants from immigrating into America. These ‘laws with scientific walls’ are meant to symbolize how these immigrants are powerless against these laws, and instead, have no other choice to accept and abide by them. 

This piece reminds others that there are more to people than what they are labeled as. Looking at society right now, people are still being labeled as something before they are even seen as a human, and soon as they are labeled that’s all people view them as. They could be a mother, daughter, son, father, grandmother, and so much more. This poem also acknowledges that a social hierarchy is still prevalent in society today and that no one, regardless of position in society, should have the authority to label a human being as ‘illegal’. This piece makes people reflect on society today and how easy it is for people to discriminate against others who are different.

 

‘Dear White America’ (Danez Smith) Response:

Racism has always been an issue in society; but when taken in more consideration, anyone can notice that even after many years of civilization this issue never gets better. The poem “Dear White America” by Danez Smith serves as a wake up call to those who are remaining ignorant to the concept of racism and to call out those who engage in racism itself. This tragic piece provides insight into the harsh reality many black people face in predominantly ‘white’ societies, and are still facing today. It also questions why racism still exists in this world, and how mainly white people are so blatantly racist to black people regardless of the horrid history of racism black people have previously experienced. 

Race plays a very negative role in society today, and instead of coming together in unison and planning to end this issue, nothing is being done. Society gets to pick and choose people based on their race, choosing who to give privilege to and deciding who gets to suffer. Countless black lives are lost everyday due to racism and this is not seen as a significant issue to those who aren’t directly affected by it. The poet makes an effort to raise awareness about how prevalent racism still is in society today and how black people are tired of the fear, pain and violence inflicted upon them just because they are different. They want a safe environment for their people to live, without the fear of being brutally assaulted by police officers or without having to face injustice. Without proper measures and awareness to stop such an ongoing issue, the racism in society will never get better. A world with true equality can surely emerge; however, with the high levels of ignorance and lack of intervention with racism in the world today, that future is likely unattainable.

As a Hijabi and a person of color myself, I can deeply relate to this poem and empathize with black people who face these injustices or other races that experience such encounters with prejudice and racism. I, on multiple occasions, have faced racism and discrimination based solely on the fact that I wear a hijab. The blatant comments and actions that were directed towards me were beyond scary, especially for myself; however, the severe violence and pain others have experienced due to racism highlighted in this poem make me reflect on my own experiences, and even make me feel thankful that I haven’t experienced such severe encounters with racism. 

I truly felt different from others and I constantly wonder, would this person have made the same remarks if I had looked different? If I didn’t wear a Hijab? Any person of colour, or simply anyone who isn’t privileged, will eventually become a victim of racism. And seeing how society isn’t making many plans to change that, myself and countless other people may never live to see true equality.

Citations:

https://www.psychologicalscience.org/publications/observer/obsonline/collective-action-and-black-lives-matter.html

https://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/europe/headscarves-banned-work-eu-court-b1884640.html 

https://nirn.fpg.unc.edu/practicing-implementation/nirn%E2%80%99s-commitment-justice-and-dismantling-racism

https://stories.td.com/us/en/article/a-message-from-our-ceo-additional-actions-to-combat-racism-and-its-impacts

https://www.cfr.org/backgrounder/us-immigration-debate-0

https://www.vox.com/policy-and-politics/22557613/reagan-immigration-reform-amnesty-legalization-biden

https://today.duke.edu/2016/11/poet-laureate-juan-felipe-herrera-brings-activist-voice-poetry

https://www.forbes.com/sites/andyjsemotiuk/2020/01/30/what-do-immigrants-want-and-how-do-they-get-it/

 

Prejudice and Healing.

Prejudice and Healing.

In response to the poem “Dear White America,” I’ll be releasing a poem about Asian racism during the worst phases of the global epidemic. “Dear White America” author Danez Smith highlights the African American struggle in the United States of America and the lack of understanding among many people who have the advantage of feeling unaffected. Smith attempts to call out bias while relating to individuals who have experienced it to educate those who are uninformed. When I first read the poem, the first thought that sprang to mind was how fortunate I am not to have experienced hatred in this manner, but I still want to understand the misery and suffering that it brings. There were numerous cases of anti-Asian discrimination during the outbreak, with people hurting elderly Asian men and women as though they were to blame for the illness. Many of you may not know, but I am half-Japanese and seeing so much bigotry thrown towards people of Asian ancestry was both sad and repugnant to me. These acts of prejudice have sparked outrage on social media, and large groups of people have formed movements to stop the increase in violence against Asian Americans and Canadians (https://www.gofundme.com/f/support-aapi-community-fund, I’ve given the link to the main gofundme if you want to do more research). I plan to create a poem with influence from the murder of Vicha Ratanapakdee, a Taiwanese American who died at the age of 84. Ratanapakdee was killed in an attack in which the perpetrator shoved him, causing his head to hit the pavement, where he died. The absurdity of this behaviour was that despite the victim’s counsel showing CCTV footage of the incident, the suspect (who I will not name) was found not guilty. While reading what I have to say, I would appreciate it if you could reflect on situations of discrimination you have witnessed or been a part of, and just reflect in any manner you like.


Rising with the white sun,
That flies high out of reach of pain,
A beautiful day has just begun,
Unforseeing of my bloods stain.

Up and down O'Farrell St,
A push to my back before I can speak, 
 Face to face with the concrete,
All is droned out but a womens shriek.

My eyes begin to droop,
Hatred in the air, 
Was it all because of my ethnic group,
Bystanders, all they can do is stare.

Reminiscent of the past, 
My daughters face breaks like glass, 
My life was taken to fast,
Pain begins to pass.

Fading into black, 
Hated because of my race,
All is silent as I lie on my back,
A statistic, just another case.

Citation: https://riversideeddy.ca/orangeshirtday2018/

“In This Place,” by Amanda Gorman, was the second poem to which I responded. Gorman takes the audience on a journey throughout America, stopping in cities connected with tragedies that convey the fortitude and force of African American men and women. According to Gorman, the country is diverse, but it still has a long way to go to include one and another. She closes by telling the readers that they have a poem to write that will transform the world and everything around them. I’ve decided to create a poem in response to Gorman because I believe the injustices faced by Canada’s Aboriginal people are related to what Gorman has said. My poem is primarily about indigenous peoples and residential schools. Although I can’t entirely convey the horrors that occurred in the schools, I have done my research and will attempt to do so justice in this poem.


Where the story starts,
There lies an abundance of broken hearts,
Across Canada the scars still apparent,
Young Aboriginal children stripped from their parents.

Their rights taken
Households shaken
Culture forsaken
Yet, we think it's in the pursuit of education.

Time flows slowly in these halls, 
Forced to follow when the preacher calls,
Friends we know abruptly missing,
In this place their is no reminiscing.

Feed us like we are mutts,
No possibility of change, No If, And's, or Buts,
Cuts and burns flooding my heart with pain,
Scars not healing, a testament to the intergenerational strain.

Citation for cover image: https://www.gofundme.com/c/act/stop-aapi-hate

Poetry Seminar Responses

Stunning storm pictures captured by Nova Scotians | CBC News

Weather”  Claudia Rankine response:

Labelling 2020 as a hard year is an understatement. It changed thousands of lives and took many more. Starting off with the pandemic that shook the generation to the core. Rankine explains this whole experience through the form of poetry. In the poem, there is a line that says “drop by drop” meaning that more Covid rules and regulations were set every day and it was a storm of confusion. The rest of the poem is about racism, mostly the black lives matter movement. Racism took a big turn in 2020 when Goerge Floyd was killed. The world was in chaos when the details of his death got out. There is a metaphorical use of an umbrella which represents protection and the fact that everyone is without one. Racism destroys communities and the people living in them. “White silence equals violence” is a verse said in the poem implying that if white people don’t step up for the coloured people, conflicts can arise and cause more problems in society. I personally do believe that racism is an issue that will keep on getting bigger and worse if immediate attention isn’t given to it. The act of racism is a rippling effect but can be prevented if we all help stop the rock from falling in the water. 

 

 

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In the poem “We Shoot Children Too, Don’t We” by Don Almagor, there is a strong message of awareness about going Palestine and Israeli war. So much violence and harm are caused to the Arab Palestinians. Deaths, riots, violence, and envy in every corner you turn. It is heartbreaking because Isreal has no right to demolish every aspect of civilization the Arabs built for themselves. They came and just forcefully took the whole country away from them. In the poem, there’s a line that says “To play in peace”, meaning that children are getting injured while just playing on the streets, there is no peace and sanctuary for anyone. There is so much collateral damage in this war, countless people are getting huer by it. This is emphasized in the line “And facing that flag to cry, as we did, that night” Israel has taken advantage of their vulnerability since they have so much power because they have support from outside forces. Even though this is a big war and the whole world knows about it, no one is doing anything to spread awareness or stop it. There is a line in the poem that says “But not tonight”. This is saying that people are delaying the step of action necessary to end this war even though someone needs to step up and put this war to an end because it has been going on for way too long and so much damage has been done. Both sides will keep fighting for the right to their land until a great amount of power puts an end to this. 

 

 

 

Photo References:

Palestine Flag: https://www.alibaba.com/product-detail/3×5-ft-printing-palestinian-flag-palestine_62552719433.html

Storm: https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/nova-scotia/stunning-storm-pictures-captured-by-nova-scotians-1.6032572

 

 

 

 

Poetry Seminar Responses

Poetry Seminar Responses

Response to “Passive Voice” By Laura Da

Passive voice was written to recollect the past memories of past ancestors and reflect on what they have done. it is important to do this in order for you to get a better understanding of what they’ve done in the past and how you may or may not want to follow that path. In some cases in life, you want to try and define your family’s traditions and go a different path they never thought about. But how are you going to do this if you don’t know what has and hasn’t worked out for your people in the past? Or you can continue to your normal family customs.  In Laura Da’s case, she happens to come from a bold line of indigenous peoples that have inhabited the pacific northwest for hundreds of years. So it is a big part of the aboriginal culture to follow the traditions of your tribe in order to keep them going for many more generations. These Traditions hold significance not only in a spiritual way but in a way that connects you closer to important figures in life. In the past, it has been tried many times to strip the ingenious peoples of their culture which can be deterred by people still trying to practice their traditions today.

 

Journal response to “Dear White America” By Danez Smith

Prejudice is common all over the world. But the most talked-about form of prejudice has to the preconceived beliefs of African Americans. Which is the one talked about in the poem. Many people still to this day believe that all black people are no good criminals. However, these people’s mindsets have failed to accept the fact that African Americans are just like you and can accomplish great things. So it is to their surprise that a coloured family ends up moving next to them in their posh gated neighbourhood. So this is why I feel like the best way to combat prejudice is through education. I don’t know how this will be done but I know the true ignorance of some white Americans, not allowing the fact that coloured people can reach success without means of crime. Some Americans still believe in segregating neighbourhoods in  order to ” keep the crime out.” These are the types of people that need to be better educated in order to change their viewpoints. Now we’ve all seen those videos on social media where white people call the cops on black people for no real reason. Same idea here, these people need to realize that African Americans are just normal everyday people minding their own business. And not some intimidating creature that wants your soul. So in conclusion I feel like people just have the incorrect mindset surrounding people of colour and it needs to be altered in order to reduce prejudice.